An off-the-cuff poem-thingy I wrote a few years ago and recently rediscovered . . .

[wonderbink]

Forgive

What was
only lives
if I
breathe life
into it

I choose
to hold
my breath

Comments

[useless-halo.livejournal.com]

That's beautiful, and kind of sad... thank you for sharing it :)


*hugs*

[psychestevie.livejournal.com]

Very powerful

[britpoptarts.livejournal.com]

Well done.

A nice definition on how not to let obsession take over your whole being, only said in a much nicer manner. I can also see other interpretations.

An English degree is a blessing and a curse. :)